Thursday, January 27, 2011

Carpe diem


the sun smiles
in flashes of gold

capricious carp
seize the day

4 comments:

  1. I love the play on words :D and the carp are beautiful! x

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  2. love this - very clever play on words - visuals and text complement each other wonderfully

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  3. I love the word play in your stone poem, and the imagery in "the sun smiles in flashes of gold," beautiful line and poem.

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