Dry eyed she lay, in her lonely bed
Tears of heartache left unshed
Shadows of fear
Since welfare came and took her away;
To a place of safety, they said.
Away from that other life she'd led
To live as a prisoner here, instead
Inside these walls, day after day
Dry eyed she lay.
Of forgotten places, things unsaid
A place of love
With this sweet dream inside her head,
Dry eyed she lay.
These revisions were suggested to me and I think they work better than what I had. Thank you
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