Into the past, I drift once more,
To a time gone by and familiar faces,
A mystic realm of magic places,
On that wondrous distant shore.
Familar streets I re-explore,
Stepping lightly in open spaces
Following all the well loved traces
Into the past.
I floated down that corridor,
No friendly face, no warm embraces
Just cold grey ash
And I crave sleep take me evermore
Into the past.
I was wrong. There are always changes to be made.
Really interesting to see the progression from one draft to another, Merlene. Love the rose too, did you take the picture yourself? It's really beautiful xxx
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