Missing in (in)action

Not a lot happening on this page for the past few days and here it is October, and the beginning of this month's challenge, already. With no preparation, I've decided to continue last month style diversity without the theme.


In the middle of the night
a neighbouring dog
nipped at the edges of my sleep
shaking me awake
with terrier tenacity and
a torment of ill timed barks

in the morning I snarled
into my food bowl
...a dangerous breed




2nd draft



In the middle of the night
a neighbouring dog
nipped at the edges edge of my sleep
shaking me awake
with terrier tenacity and
a torment of ill timed barks

in the morning I
snarled snarled
into my food bowl
...a dangerous breed