Tuesday, July 17, 2012

6th Englyn 2nd draft

sisters of mercy, with none to show
know throw aside the orphan's have no right
no God looks on this poor mite
to feel God's love day or night

1 comment:

  1. Sad but so often true, I think by working the poem you have been increasing the drama. I like it.


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