6th Englyn 3rd draft

sisters of mercy, with none to show

throw aside the orphan's right

no God looks upon this poor mite

I missed posting/drafting yesterday as I was conducting the fifth session - Character Meets Setting - of the longitudinal novel writing workshop for the Wordsmiths of Melton writing group. 

6th Englyn 2nd draft

sisters of mercy, with none to show

know throw aside the orphan's have no right

no God looks on this poor mite

to feel God's love day or night