Sunday, August 14, 2011

4th Triolet - August challenge

1st draft - Saturday 13 August

He steps between cracks, not tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats
he's always on time, never one second late
he steps between cracks, not tempting fate
his wardrobe is ordered according to date
making perfect sense to this bureaucrat
he steps between cracks, not tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats.

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2nd draft - Sunday 14 August

He steps between cracks, not never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats
he's always on time, notever one second late
he steps between cracks, not never tempting fate
his wardrobe is ordered according to date
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he steps between cracks, not never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats

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3rd draft - Monday 15 August


He steps between cracks, never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats
he's always on time, not one second late
he steps between cracks, never tempting fate
his wardrobe is ordered according to date
he checks behind doors and under the mats
he steps between cracks, never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats

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4th draft - Tuesday 16 August


He steps between cracks, never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats
he's always on time, not one second late
he steps between cracks, never tempting fate
his wardrobe is ordered according to date
he checks behind doors and under the all mats
he steps between cracks, never tempting fate
twists around ladders and avoids black cats


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