Wednesday, August 17, 2011

5th Triolet - August challenge 1st draft

Can love survive the deep corrosion
of acidic words etched on the heart
thrown in anger-fueled explosion
Can love survive the deep corrosion,
the disbelief, the trust erosion
when romance threatens to depart
Can love survive the deep corrosion
of acidic words etched on the heart

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