Monday, August 22, 2011

August poetry challenge 6th Triolet

22nd August 1sd raft

If I could chose my time to die
It would be in a moment of bliss
Before it passed on a whispered sigh
If I could chose my time to die
I'd offer this as my last goodbye
An act of absolute submiss
If I could chose my time to die
It would be in a moment of bliss

23 August 2nd draft


If I could chose my time to die
It would be in a moment of bliss
Before it passed on a whispered sigh
If I could chose my time to die
I'd offer this up as my last goodbye
An act of absolute submiss
If I could chose my time to die
It would be in a moment of bliss

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